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Maybe

maybe they don't hate her
but maybe they do
they yell at her for doing
something that her sister does
is that why she despises her sister so
why her sister gets looked down upon
after she gets yelled at
is that why she yells
"I hate you Dont talk to me again"
like her sister just killed her favorite pet in the world

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  • ninchick08
    October 23, 2007

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    hah thats cool, i wwas doing that to alot of poems today, i just got bored and started correcting peoples stuff, dont take offense to it


  • ninchick08
    October 23, 2007
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    despises
    favorite
    again
    does
    my pet peeve is spelling errors


    • tjj
      October 23, 2007
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      sorry im not a very good speller