I'm sorry for the way I left you,
I just wanted to be with my love come true.
I just can't stop crying because I miss you so bad,
Sometimes I just feel so sad.
All I want to know if your happy,
Even when your at home without me.
I want you to know mom that I do love you,
An I'm sorry if I hurt you.
Author notes
I would like to tell my mom I'm sorry if I have ever hurt her. An That I love her very much.
Amber.
A contest entry
- Calling ALL poets!!! by JadalaStar.
400 points, ended November 24, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Mpms are or should be understanding people, she'll forgive and forget I hope, anyways the poem really has emotional appeal
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Thanks
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Amber, I like this poem a lot you put so much meaning adn expression in it.
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Awe this is such a beautiful poem to your mom! Wow I didn't expect it to be your mom it came at me as a suprise great job
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Thanks for reading I'm glad you liked it. Feel free to read more.
Amber
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beautiful
amaing write hun its beautiful.
hugs.
skitzy
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Truly heartfelt
I know I commented on this before but I couldnt find one I havent read already They are all great poems -
well i hope it cheers you up to know that i think this is a poem from your heart and that forgiveness should be for the asking, as you would do to others...wonderful...PK
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Thanks for reading and please feel free to read more.
Amber
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Teens can go through so may rough times as they try to find out who they are. Have only looked at it from aprents, grandparent side - this give me a look at the other side too - easy to read and understand.
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Thank you so much for reading.
Amber
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Aww hunni... I wish I could cheer you up. I bet your mom knows how much you love her!! xx
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Thanks for reading
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Excellent...If my daughter had these feelings, I would want her to tell me...leaf
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Thank you so much for reading.
Amber
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This was really good. I could relate.
Keep up the good work
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Thanks for reading.
Amber
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The parting of the ways. Mother knows it will come some day, but is sometimes not prepared. I am sure she will love your message. she couldn't ask for more.
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thanks for reading
Amber
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So heart felt
Until your a mom its hard for young adults to know as the teenager moves on in this world .She prayes they will marry and live a fruitful life and have a family . Mothers know so much yet sometimes the young chooses the path to find out on their own and at times heartache takes the leed . But we all have to break away in our own way for we are still learning and we
truly feel in our hearts we cant do without that person . Just be careful and dont ever feel you wont be welcomed back home . She may be hurt and she may fuss but if the love is there you will then be embraced for Mothers love never ends .
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Tears well up in my eyes that comment was touching. I just hope she understands. It's been a while since I gone away but I want her to know I'm happy but I feel like I sometimes can't show it because I don't know if she is happy.
Amber
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What would your contest be about? This is so sad, I don't know but tell me about it anyway, perhaps I can assist, who knows?
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I don't know.
I miss my mother I moved away to be with my true love. But I feel sometimes she sad and hurt. An the thought of it mkaes me cry.
If I had the points right now I wanted people to write me something that would cheer me up and make me laugh.
Amber
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Ah I'm sorry my dear...this is sad. But yeah, we can't always make ALL the people feel good(unfortunately though). I really hope you're feeling better.
Take care
Keep writing and God Bless
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Thanks for reading.
Amber
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This is sad sometimes life is so hard and love and trying to make someone happy is always tough and when you dont know what they feel is very hard.Im sorry that your sad sending you much love
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Hey, Thanks for reading.
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Hey, Thanks for reading.
Amber
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