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Edge-nessh.

Straight edge, like the razor that cuts

Your fragile wrists

Cuts to show

The pain

You attempt to hide

Cuts to show

That on the inside

You’re pretty fucking ugly

Straight edge? Like the razor…

Cuts to show

That

Remorse

Is for those

Who’ve something

True to show

Straight edge, like the-

Very things you told me

Very lies you sold me

You realize now

That you can’t have me anymore

You realize?-Yes.

Straight edge, like the razor

You use to end it all

Straight edge, like the fuck

You told me, I was your all

Author notes

18:49] I see you lips moving, and I want them: IT YOU
[18:49] ::Chris Curse::: yesh...
[18:49] I see you lips moving, and I want them: say hi to me

Where is your boy tonight? I hope he's a gentleman, maybe he won't find out what I know, you were the last good thing about this part of town...

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  • Emm Jayy
    October 24, 2007
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    This reminds me of something... but I can't think what it is...


  • Dirty and Broken
    October 23, 2007
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    this makes me want to cry, it's sooo sad....
    it's very good though...very very good...


  • wanderingstarlet
    October 23, 2007
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    topher, i love you and your writing!


  • -CrimsonTears-
    October 23, 2007
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    nice...i likey it


  • My.Dear.Juliet
    October 23, 2007
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    I love that song. "Grand Theft Autumn"

    • backdrop.silhouette
      October 23, 2007
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      yep-yep...why didnt you comment on the song i wrote *points*

      • My.Dear.Juliet
        October 23, 2007
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        Its good! I was getting there I'm kinda tied up with chiton's shit right now.

        • backdrop.silhouette
          October 23, 2007
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          oh...sorry. what's he saying?


          • My.Dear.Juliet
            October 23, 2007
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            that he is trying to help but i told him i dont want his help, he's tryint to save us, i said we were long gone. I can't wait til lunch so i can tell him that i have moved on.


            • backdrop.silhouette
              October 23, 2007
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              i say we buy a special box for him...one full of sharp objects and scorpions and spiders.

              laney's whispering spiders in my ear...then she just did it again...like two seconds ago...now i'mma go watch this dumb movie...er...pretend like i'm watching this movie...my eyes hurt.

              i'm bored...

              lalalal...it's these sub-standard hotels on the corner of...bleh de bleh...only so appealing because they're so un-appealing

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