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Heart Strings

Walking down
an empty country road…

shaded by limbs
of towering oaks,
overpowered by
Spanish Moss…

my heart feels
a slight tug,
as if someone were
thinking of me
at that very moment.

A slight smile,
creeps across my face
as I realize…

you, my love,
were holding my hand
all along.



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  • Breaking Inside
    November 5, 2007
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    that is very good!! good luck in my contest!!!


  • ckwriter69
    October 25, 2007

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    ahhh very heartfelt and full of emotion. I like the way you have presented this. Thanks for sharing your images. Keep writing.