I can feel her hand rap around my throat again and again
It hurts not physicaly but mentaly
The fact that she only loves me enough to try and kill me
someone that you loved all you life
Loves you enough to grab you by the neck
And its all over a Bouncing Ball
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Powerful
This poem is very strong. I think if you added a little more to it the poem could be even better. What is the significance of the ball? What is the relationship between thise two people? There are alot of things you could explore. Great emotion!
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thank you it was ment to be an open realationship between the people and the ball it annoyed her for no spicific reason
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