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Never Look Back

Tears and bleeding fingertips as the moment pasted,
a threatened voice and a scared scream of torment.
Rushing rivers of devistation and criptic messages,
the flow of my blood and the sadness I scream.

I take this understanding of what I am doing,
ripping threw the hard core body of my esistance.
Shreading threw the words and torments of simple lies,
I cut this body up that keeps me alive.

Pulling and pushing away from this tool of justice you gave,
smiles and laughs fade away at the price of sanity.
My walls hold me up no longer as my tears dry and go to waste,
my parents and family scared that this is the day.

Table tops roll as the fights break glass and shatter hope,
white to red carpet as ridged egdes scrap the skin.
Tears in all eyes as nothing seemed to stop,
my family tried to stop me but my mind was made.

I stabbed till my mind was blank and my eyes were dry,
emotions no more as my body finally died away.
A simple relaxation of the body in my mind,
but everyone tried to bring me back alive.

Today I walk around and smile and laugh and never look back,
tears always flow for the memory of rivers and tears.
They saved me somehow and brought a light to my eyes,
and I will never look back at the bloody memory again.

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  • crystallynnbradford
    October 30, 2007
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    wow...you just made my night


  • ExpectingMommy18
    October 30, 2007

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    wow this was amazing,you did an amazing job with this peice i hope to read more in the future.

    thanks for the entry and good luck in the contest!


  • Andi. gold member
    October 23, 2007
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    absolutely amazing!
    Just...wow
    mindblowing!
    the best of luck to you!
    ♥ Unity