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Distance (Christian's Feelings)

Remember how we used to be?
Arm and arm happily,
Kissing under the moon light,
In the silkiness of the sky.

In my arms you would stay,
Until that very day,
I didn’t want you to leave,
But it was for your own safety.

KoryBug and I miss you so.
My love for you will never stop,
It will only grow.
Distance is what makes the heart grow founder.

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  • XxGoldenxXDawnxX
    October 31, 2007

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    A very enjoyable and inspiring work. I like these lines the best.

    In my arms you would stay,
    Until that very day,
    I didn’t want you to leave,
    But it was for your own safety


  • midnight eyes
    October 23, 2007
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    Well done keep up the great work.


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