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Mother (gold)

Missing image
With outer mask of power
look deeply into the eyes
for there you'll see the softest glow
of a heart that gently beats.

A mother's love is sure and true
with a will of strong protection
defending her children against all odds
with devotion none will ever sway.



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  • a good piece, ah yes, the mother and devotion, she will kill in a heartbeat if it meant keeping her young safe and sound.

  • kdom
    March 27
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    This is lovely!


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 24, 2007
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    yes the eyes reveal the heart ,,well done gaylene lovely write xxpp

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    October 24, 2007
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    See I told you... gold for sure... I am so glad this won... congrats hunny

  • Seeking Peace silver member
    October 23, 2007

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    I sure picked the wrong writes of yours to read today ... beautiful sentiment in this one.... gold for sure

    Karen

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