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dishing it out

he could be her bad boy
guitar and faded jeans

she insults him
with a coy smile
misses the comeback

caught in thoughts
of his mouth
at her neck




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  • J.J. Sass
    October 26, 2007

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    This is one is yummy. I love a mouth at my neck, but what woman doesn't?

    Best wishes in the contest.


  • misselaineous
    October 24, 2007

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    as long as he doesn't bite


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 23, 2007

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    woot woot mama plays guitar ... yes she does...

    nice... ... hmmm mmm sensual like Samba Pa Ti...

    yeah!!!

  • Suzanne Dia
    October 23, 2007

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    you're naughty



  • asymmetry
    October 23, 2007
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    you're bad. . .
    I agree with m. he should just take her


  • Cat gold member
    October 23, 2007
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    gotta wait for the comeback.. always-

    this is wonderful, of course

    m


    • thirdeye
      October 23, 2007
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      distraction and imagination sometimes get the better of me...

      thanks m

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