No pebble,
however small,
enters a pool
without making ripples.
Author notes
10 words
A contest entry
- Instant Gratification by islekine.
600 points, ended October 25, 2007, 22 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Truths simply spoken.
Glad to see a trophy here. ~Pamela 
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Wow! Loved it! I know how difficult it is to put an idea into ten short words but you have done it with amazing dexterity!
So simple,
so true.
Lovely!!! -
excellent...
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So true indeed, have seen this myself Good job and good luck in the contest.
Jen -
So true
The ripples today seem never ending
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This is so true. We all leave our mark in this world and in the lives that surround us even though we may not realize it at the moment. I was visualizing your words in my mind and really what you have said here is quite profound. When a pebble is tossed in any body of water the ripples that shoot out go on and on. Great thinking here!
♥ Touchof1der -
Wow, this is very philosophical, I liked it!
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