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[ Kill me if you like ]

Kill me if you like
I don't fucking care
You messed with my head
And left me for dead
And now I want revenge

Revenge is sweet?
Thats a lie
It metallic
Monosylabic
Revenge tastes like blood

Dripping from your heart
Slipping out so quickly
Pumping before it slows,
Covering me completely.

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  • Despairkitty
    October 24, 2007

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    WELCOME TO ALLPOETRY!

    Well I think you did a good job with this. I think this piece showed some real malice. Welcome to the site and feel free to ask me any questions.
    Despair


  • IronIcecream
    October 23, 2007

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    too cliché

    revenge tastes like
    biting your own lip until you can't recognize the taste of your own blood
    screaming until your gut eviscerates