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Saying Goodbye

All the times we had,
All the memories we share
As our lives change,
Time gets spare
"I've gotta get my life in order"
I'm not a part of that life
Maybe I once was,
But now I am no longer
When I need you most
You're no longer mine
So I say goodbye
To the one who could cheer me
When no one else could come close
The one who I could see myself with
All the times, the memories
Will be locked away
Until a time when you
Have your life in order
And you want me there
Even as the tears fall
I can't imagine my life
Without you in it
But for now...
I must say goodbye

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  • DeeplyFallen2010
    November 13, 2007
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    Very good... sad and touching... I like it


  • justcurious
    October 24, 2007

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    there are only a few people i've ever seen him turn on... somehow i don't think you warrant that kind of response from him hun. do you want me to ask him something for you?


  • blueyez
    October 23, 2007

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    sad but in some parts it seemed you wanted to rhyme then in some parts you dropped the rhyme all together.