Sshhhhhhh!
She’s sleeping
See the soft raven hair upon the pillow?
Her angelic face cradled on her arm
Long legs dingle from the edge
The soft rising of her chest
See how peaceful she sleeps?
A soon to be woman
Still makes little girl mistakes
The delicate flower
Will bloom
The unopened woman
Still lies upon the bed
In a list
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Lovely poem you have penned. You paint a lovely image of a young lady about to blossom into a woman. Thsnk you for sharing. You take care, Santy
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I love the imagry of this I can see the girl lying on the bed and I love that. Keep up your great writing... This makes me remember why I used to read everything you wrote... Sorry, I've been too busy to read or write much. Great job on this piece though.
~Alix
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