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Mind Body And Soul

My mind is so cloudy as the
weather would be. I hope one
day for my mind to be free.
My mind has corrupted on all
of the pain. For there is no
more hurt I can possibly gain.

My body is drained like a soda
can. I often ask myself, who is
there to hold my hand. My soul
is Spiritually dehydrated, and
my faith has faded. I don't know
what to do. For my mind body and
soul needs to be renew.

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  • She burns
    October 27, 2007

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    I always hope this one too, how hard it is to feel always pain, crazy thoughts, just everything that makes me wanna dissappear, everything is a train wreck inside of me...

    I hope you're feeling a little better today there,
    Antonio

    • shamricka
      October 28, 2007
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      I want to thank you so much. It gets better as the days go by. you just have to continue to pray. Thank you for all of your support.

  • shamricka
    October 22, 2007
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    That is one of my favorite poems. I know I put my heart into it, and I will do my best to improve my punctuation skills