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What If

What if the moon sang, would you record it?
What if the rivers danced, would you videotape it?
What if souls had wings, could they fly?
What if I where to die, would you cry?

What if time changes, and I know it will
Would you be here holding me still?
Would you hold my hand if the world came to an end?
What if you could take back all the time you have spent?

Would things still be the same way
Or would the “what ifs” get in your way

Please tell me what you think

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    January 6, 2008
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    Pretty, sad and nicely done sonnet type thing....


  • MoonHaze
    December 14, 2007

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    I really like this. Its cute and very sweet if you really thik about it. Its deep and loving. ♥ ♥ ♥


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    October 23, 2007

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    awesum write

    very thought provoking and deep. loved it very much. specially liked the last two lines its very strong. i dont really know what else to say but i luved it

    keep on writing!