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Lost in thought

An endless hope,
for a dream.
A dream,
so inviting so warm.
So warm,
are your arms around me.
Around me,
my dreams crack and fall.
Fall,
so far under your invisible.
Invisible,
to the world and yourself.
Yourself,
so alone so unwanted.
So unwanted,
you are lost in your hell.
Hell,
where your heart burns with desire.
Desire,
so far from fulfilled.
Fullfilled,
to the state that your smiling.
Your smiling,
non existant, unknown.
Unknown,
is your pain to your close ones.
Your close ones,
the reasons your living.
Your living,
a dream that it's over.
It's over,
fearing an endless hope.

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I have felt depressed and anxios and I really hope that this helps you feel how it feels. To be lost in thought and alone in your heart.

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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    October 23, 2007

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    I know very well how depression feels as I live with it every day, so feel for you, and understand totally what you are feeling, I have been like this for a year now already, and it's only getting worse, as I can't lift myself out this time, thank you for sharing with us, Josephine