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You Can Fly

You can fly to the rythm of your heart,
just waiting for cupid's dart.
You can fly to with feathered wings
while you voice sings.
You can fly and dance full of grace
to search for dreams to embrace.
You can fly to the stars,
and travel all the way to Mars.
You can fly high to the great blue sky,
and you don't have to com back down untill July.

All you have to do is believe and try,

and then you can fly! 

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You Can Fly from Peter Pan.

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  • AngelEyes13
    October 29, 2007

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    I'm not a major fan of this song but I like the peom and the idea behind it. Thank you soo much for entering my contest.


  • horsecowgirl
    October 23, 2007

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    this is very cheery! i like it. i do have one question though; i get that july rhymes but why july? its just my own opinion.(weird) this piece goes perfectly with you motto:"if the sky is your limit, how will you be a star?" you took the title and used it like it would be used in the real song. this makes it so much easier to understand and follow! great piece! best of luck in the contest! keep up the fabulous writing!
    ~Horsecowgirl~