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Resist

Smile.
Flash the keys,
slam them in, unlock the door

"Hey-"

Hey.

Hypnosis, fall into a trance
fall into his arms,
collapse.

Casual, relax.

Look him through the corner of your eye
he smiles.

Blush.

Let his fingers trip over your thigh,
inching their way-

"No-"

"No?"

Breathe. Remember. Resist-
Leans in, feverish breath against tingling flesh;
Pulse, rush, euphoria-
Overtakenovercomeoverpowered
Resist!

Remember.

"Can't..."

"I know..."

Sigh.  Stroke his hair.
Slip his hand aside.

"Do you love her?"

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    March 1, 2008

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    This it ruly heart wrenching, but ever so beautiful! I felt each word, because I guess I have been there in some respects. Very expressive and heartfelt.


  • warrior-eagle
    November 4, 2007

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    Hood-Winked!

    Breathe. Remember. Resist-

    If many of us could just resist. This poem was just wonderfully written and made me think of how we give in too fast to temptation.grea job.

    ...Simply Me♥


  • Polaja Greeters member
    November 1, 2007
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    This poem is very thought provoking... I keep imagining different situations that would apply... I think that will keep me occupied for a while ^_^;... you are a talented poet... I like that you aren't confined to one or two forms of poetry...

    Keep writing

    Polly