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The Lies I've Been Told

So many lies I have been told
My head is spinning from it all
How do I know
when somebody is telling me the truth
and not some putruid lie?

They said them to my face
and the worst part is
I believed every word they spat at me

I was stupid enough
Not to see straight through them
And there lies

Now I wish
I could spit there own lies
back into their faces

But it is too late for that

Author notes

This is for everybody who has been lied to and gotten hurt from it.

Eclipsexoxo

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 26, 2007
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    Excellent!

    This is a great write, not nice when people lie and they do hurt at times. I wish you all the best in this contest!

  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 26, 2007

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    Excellent!

    This is a great write, not nice when people lie and they do hurt at times. I wish you all the best in this contest!


  • birch
    October 25, 2007

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    this is something i can relate to a great bit right now. maybe not in the exact same ways, but similar. thank you for sharing this with me. dusty