His features leap off the page as his features are discribed
i become entransed by the fire in his eyes
the strength in how he speaks
i can practically feel his hair through my fingers
the authority he demands but the softness that he feels
the passion in his words
and the thoughts that cross his mind
he is so real so captivating so intense
my fingers race across the lines as he bewitches my soul
[ok this is sort of wierd but in truth it must be told]
the secrets behind his eyes
every word he never said
the mystery so unsaid even though he speaks with such truth
the love in which he feels
but he's just a character in the most captivating novel ive ever read
A contest entry
- I Opened A Book and Fell In Love by CoundessaScarlotti.
500 points, ended October 27, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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SWOOOOOON.
rawr. im in more than one facebook group about that glory of a character. -
This is a great example of what I was looking for; specific,passionate,and leaving room for speculation.
Thank you and goodluck -
OMG i love this!!! now if i couldve wrote somethin this good. my poem bout edard doesnt do him justice but this WOW
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