I'm chiled to the core,
Shadows darken the light.
I begged and screamed for more,
But was left alone to fight.
My heart is now frayed,
But still I lend a hand.
Your soul I tried to save,
But I failed in the end.
I see your self-destructing,
Riped and torn at the seam.
I tried to stop the tearing,
But it's how you like it I see.
So let them degrade your body,
Treat you like some cunt.
Did those 5 minutes set you free,
Is that the life you want?
Do you want to be labled,
Become just another slut.
A little cocaine angel,
Who doesn't give a fuck.
Cuz you DO deserve better,
And I did try to help.
I see a happy future,
If you'd stop destroying yourself
Author notes
this is to my ex, we broke up for a lot of reasons....but still I'm to blame......she's totally fucking her life up....and I'm the only one who actually cares...she deserves better...and I want her to see she's still my best friend......but I'm not superwoman...and feel like giving up.
-Tash-xxx
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I'm not asking you to care..if you want to give up then just give up on me like everyone else...its not like i hae any reasons to live anyways..my life is fucked up and im a fuck up and nothing but a burden to you and everyone else...and if yu care so much then why did you give up so easuily and just move on to someone else? thats what hurts the most...but anyways im not asking you to waste your time on me...but this was a good poe...keep writting
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So Sad
my dear sweet Tasha this is such a bitter sweet poem and well it saddens me as I read this poem. I really felt the raw depth and e-motion pen through out this poem. heart break is a very hard subject to pen about because it hurts so much even to share. its sad that your best friend is shooting up drugs and drinking and what knot because of a mere mistake that happened. what hurts most is the fact that you are her only friend who truly cares. sometimes even though her life is spiraling out of control you need to just find that inner will power and strength and help her into a better life. she will reject you and fight you alot but in the end least you can feel less guilt depe within. its sad this is happening but hopefully you will figure out a cause to stop her from doing this. keep up the good work but as always you are in my prayers.
Paul
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