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The rain

Rain is like a shower except we don't get undressed.

It is beautiful in ways I can't explain.

The angels are crying to give us rain.

Rain is beautiful don't complain.

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  • Yy13
    August 1, 2008
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    Are those angels crying tears of joy?


  • Candy6
    February 21, 2008
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    Nice write.


  • Freed by Mercy silver member
    February 1, 2008

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    I've learned to like the rain, especially in Spring and Summer. Rain makes for green grass and lush gardens.

    I agree, don't complain. Nice write.


  • Felissa
    November 3, 2007

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    I always think it's kinda weird how most people hate the rain. I've mostly felt that way about it my whole life.
    Well described.


  • Mizuki wolf
    October 29, 2007

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    Neat. I gotta say that is exactly how the rain makes me feel don't know about anyone else but that's how I feel. I hope to read more.

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