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A New Way

A clear summer day
They rain on my parade
So to say

I've had some problems
With the authority of my mind
I'm so far from clarity
Yet; The sky sings another song

Colors blend into a colorful line
Side by side
Hand in hand
We stand on edge of grass
Stretching our arms above our heads
We stand our ground
As we feel the pain
Washing down; Washing away

It's funny how one small thing
Can change everything
Such as the rainbows crowding the sky
They change our minds
They change our ways
Days go by, where clouds dissapear
As the rain runs for cover
We see a ray of hope
We see a new way out of pain

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  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    October 23, 2007

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    wow i love this write.
    for some reason
    my childhood love of
    all things colourful is comming back.

    great write darling
    xxx


  • lesbian-in-love
    October 22, 2007
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    That was a great write. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.