Her realm was frigid icy wind
like the breath of a cruel servant.
Just to feel her commanding prescence
would chill a shiver deep within.
This nobility would not ignore one.
Her snowy lace was fine and pure.
Not one could miss her cold beauty.
Some admired her just to reassure
that all would be pristine tomorrow.
Knowingly, she lies frozen beneath.
Author notes
Contest for Everyone - Option Two - TheSnowPrincess
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- Contest For Everyone.. Take a look (options) by TheAshtrayGirl.
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Comments
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No bad thought the background went well with the poem. Good luck in the contest
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nice write x
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Beautiful piece gives me a chill brrr Flows well. Good Luck iN THe ConTest.
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This is a beautiful piece, and the imagery is amazing. I really like this; it flowed smoothly and effortlessly. Good luck in the contest!
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I like this, how you weaved the cold into her characterisation so well. Good luck in the contest.
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You gotta be kidding me. I hate people who are better than me...
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This is a brilliant piece you penned for the option you chose. I can see the host is in agreement on what a fine job you did. I could feel that icy chill and the imagery was wonderful. It flowed smoothly and was quite breathtaking. Thank you for sharing your gift with all of us. Best wishes in the contest and keep that ink flowing. Love and God bless, Joyce
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Brilliant. You took my prompt and worked magic with it. Great write
Good luck in my contest
From Jaz <3
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