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Halloween Beauties

The trick-or-treaters cram the sidewalks.
Each waiting to fill their bags.
The last house on the street…/
It is said to be the greatest every year.
On the porch stood three sisters.

One wore a Playboy Bunny costume…
In black with fish nets and black make up.
The second wore a Chinese dress…
So short you could almost see under it.
And the third wore a witch dress,
Yet it too was so short and sexy.

Three boys approached the house.
All three were in love with the girls.
And the girls loved the boys.

The play boy bunny kissed the first boy.
He was a vampire.
A classic costume every year.
The one with the Chinese dress
Kissed the second boy.
He was a fallen angel.
And the witch kissed the third boy.
He was a demon.

The Halloween Beauties took their boys.
The boys followed willingly.
They were going to make Halloween better….

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  • Trixie08
    October 22, 2007
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    LOL!! I love this one and it just ties together so well. Great Write.


  • LadyLeviathan
    October 22, 2007

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    The Halloween Beauties took their boys.
    The boys followed willingly.
    They were going to make Halloween better….

    i love the ending to this. it really ties it all together. loved this! halloween is my favorite!