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Historic tune of old music notes

Moonlit Dance; over nightly blanket calming water.

Roaring conflagration, prances his energy nightly sky.

Misty illusion, as we drift slowly past historical buildings,

taking snap shoots with our minds to hold for eternity.

Beauty opens up flowering velvet sky, stars smile down.

 

Dim silver light ignites passion within story told walls

Speak,  Knights come alive history cast building book

each eye to make it’s own story see really beauty held

within heart of each statue lay a heroic warrior willing

to fight for paint that spilt spelt beauty in nature we see.

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  • Poetry and I Inc
    October 26, 2007

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    Glad to see you've won for this dear

    as you are definitely deserving

    Your work is always a

    pleasurable mosaic

    of profound expression

    always worthy of a mum's time

    -Inc."


  • penman gold member
    October 23, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • SoulWhispher
    October 22, 2007

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    Well Done

    This should be a contest winner, the imagery and flow was perfect, one could almost feel they were there, you did a great job, John


    • Entwining Beauty
      October 22, 2007
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      Thank you my dearest friend nice to hear from you means so much to get beautiful comments