We're waiting for all hallows eve,
and the magic of its night.
When we can run free,
and give you a fright.
One night each year.
We hold it so dear.
So for it prepare
You may watch if you dare.
A contest entry
- HALLOWEEN EXTRAVAGANZA - Open til Oct. 31st by Little Eagle.
9800 points, ended November 3, 2007, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PIF PICTURE PROMPT by penman.
525 points, ended October 23, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - * H a p p y H a l l o w e e n ! * by xCandieKissesx.
450 points, ended November 1, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice Hallowe'eny feeling
"You may watch if you dare."
Congratulations on the HM.
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Thanks for your entry
Cute little poem. Very nicely done, good flow and structure. I like your idea of Halloween night.
Happy Halloween
Tammy
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Hmm..Is it just me or have I read this piece before? Anywho, I think the rhyme ruined it. It was forced and I hate forced rhyme. I think you would have done better with free verse instead. But nice effort! Good job and good luck in the contest! Kudos.
Jackie -
Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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