If I told you I loved you
I wouldn’t be lying
But when I tell the truth
You’ll be left crying.
I know this will hurt
Know that I love you
But see the thing is
I love her too.
It’s you I want to be with
But I’d love her still
And I feel in my heart
That I always will.
I hate myself
For doing this
For only giving half
Of my hearts full kiss.
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Option 4
A contest entry
- Random Options by Megan Awesome.
470 points, ended November 1, 2007, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I really like the rhyming and the form of the poem, but theres one thing that I didn't like about it. You can't LOVE two people. You can LIKE multiple people though. If you love someone you see them as your one and only, and no one could take their place. But I like the poem itself though. Great job. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck!!!
Megan -
wow thats awesome!!!!!!!
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