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Love

                              Love

                    Love is a beautiful gift
                    That two people share
              Their hearts joined together as one


            Love blooms like a beautiful red rose
                    On a warm spring day
                  As the sunlight beats down

             
                    Love flows through
                      Like an ocean
                      Deep and blue

                      Love like a dove
                  That flys high in the sky
          With the white fluffy couds high in the sky

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I was trying to think of something to write and this is waht came to mind I hope you enjoy

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  • cindy4
    April 15, 2008
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    Great written love poem.


  • Candy6
    February 25, 2008
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    Wonderful lovely poem.

  • Dennis Pickering
    October 22, 2007
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    So you thought my comment is OK huh Crystal?

  • Dennis Pickering
    October 22, 2007

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    This is what is wrong with the world. Everyone attempts to hoard love between 2 or their particular family instead of giving it freely to all - it is no monitary cost but that does NOT mean love is unvaluable and can be given to any\everyone. Dennis


    • Crystal Ellens
      October 22, 2007
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      Dennis, thank you for your comment it is highly appreciated. It means alot to me

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