Charges charging
Drowning fast
Water splashing
Voices crash
All the fallings
All the failings
And people surround
Jumping from railings
Splashing into the depths as
Zeus smiles in approval
A contest entry
- PIF PICTURE PROMPT by penman.
525 points, ended October 23, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i love it you did great and it was a wonderful take on the picture great and your words you chose to express Zeus' thoughts were awesome i really really like this piece you have penned
Charges charging
Drowning fast
Water splashing
Voices crash
All the fallings
All the failings
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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Hey,
Great Write... I really like it! Keep Up the wonderful work!
Later
Brit Brit
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i like it
*high five*
keep it up my lil homie X)
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Zues? nice, i love things like this, great.
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