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daniel on friendship

he lit up
when another man
started playing
a bari sax
on his corner

the notes so
deep and mauve
riding streetwalks
like tourists

this man knew the capital
and the culture
on the bourbon strip

 

you could hear it in his smile

they would sit together
chatting through notes
of bass and sorrow

gold crossing gold

it was the subtlest
of victories

for a man whose

only friend was

his creator

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  • tara wilson gold member
    May 23, 2008
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    "the notes so
    deep and mauve
    riding streetwalks
    like tourists"

    love that.



  • flight
    November 10, 2007
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    deep and mauve.
    wow I am in love with this series!!!!!
    peace to all ~flight


  • FindingFaith
    October 22, 2007

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    I love this one.

    the notes so
    deep and mauve
    riding streetwalks
    like tourists

    Stunning.

  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    October 22, 2007
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    when we let ourselves really go and show all sides -

    this is beautiful.


  • layla.
    October 22, 2007
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    *pats* this is flawless, but no clappies this time


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