Until you're standing by my side
No words can really tell you how
Special you make me feel.
Perhaps one day we will be together
Only time will tell, but I
Know deep in my heart that
Everything I am is because of you.
No one has ever made me so happy
When you smile my heart flips
Over and I want to be
Right there with you. I know this is a
Dream that may never come true but maybe
Someday I really will hold you in my arms
From the first time we talked the
Romance in your words stole my heart
Only you can make me feel this way
My life has changed so much since I
Met you, the things we share touch me
Even though we are so far away from each other
The miles seem to disappear. You are the
One who looks into my soul.
You are the one who makes me feel beautiful. The
One who holds my heart in his gentle hands
Until the end of time...
If you seduce my mind you can have my body
If you find my soul I will be yours forever
Author notes
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Seduce my mind and you can have my body,
Find my soul and I'm yours forever.
I found this quote from an unknown source recently and it has been in my head ever since. I sincerely hope that the writer does not mind me using a form of it in my poem.
In a list
A contest entry
- Love's true Meaning by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
360 points, ended October 31, 2007, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks for your entry - this is my favourite part:
When you smile my heart flips
Over and I want to be
Right there with you. I know this is a
Dream that may never come true but maybe
Someday I really will hold you in my arms
Great Acrostic -
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Thank you very much for the Gold trophy in your contest. I wrote this acrostic for someone a couple of weeks ago and he said I should post it but there were no contests that suited until I saw yours. Thank you again.
Take care
Margaret
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now this is waht love is realy all about
you words are so heartfelt an sincere. wit true love teh words nevr need to b spokn because teh othr wil always knoo jus exacly how you feel.
good luck in teh contest
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Thank you Jan for reading and commenting on my poem. I know what you mean about unspoken feelings and thoughts. Sometimes we just have to trust and that can be hard.
Take care my sweet angel
Margaret
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Very well written, just oozing with romance, sadness and desire.
I like the quote and what you have done with it.
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Thank you Adrian. You can read behind my words better than anyone I know. Emotions are things we have to learn to deal with I guess and sometimes the deeper they are the harder it is to do that.
Margaret
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A breath taking message delivered with your unique touch. It flows with the tenderness of your incredible heart, and it just reaches into the depths of the readers in such a special way. You always put so much into your poetry and it just feels so wonderful to read...
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Thank you. If I could truly reach into someone's heart I would do so and stay there for eternity. Your comment means a great deal to me and I am happy that you were touched by my words.
Margaret
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Sweet love
A true treasure to hold onto...Lucky are those that find & keep it going
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Thank you Bob. Whether we talk about friends or lovers it is always important to hold onto them and treasure them.
Take care my friend
Margaret
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