Grey skies
against the new
brown brick homes.
Trees shuffling slightly
against the gentle wind.
A cold breeze
turning bodies to ice.
Cars parked in driveways
stagnant, unmoving.
A window of perception
through to a lifeless world
barren of personality.
Just grey skies
against a sea of brown.
Author notes
This is a first draft so any and all comments welcome.
I will come back and up date it once I have worked the second draft.
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this. Great picture you paint here. Absolutely wonderful.
"Trees shuffling slightly
against the gentle wind.
A cold breeze
turning bodies to ice.
Cars parked in driveways
stagnant, unmoving."
Wonderful wonderful write.
Thanks for sharing, please check out my writes.
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