This spirit found me
And its curse burns my face
I can't see my body anymore
I can't be alone anymore
The curse drags out my soul
And the spirit takes my body
I feel the pain of death on me
And the warriors of hell come
And the halls of pain light up
As the song of torment rings
I look unto coal fires of hell
The burning flames of suffering
I look to see a demon coming
From the lake of sorrow
The glowing lake of souls
Reach out to him as he walks
The souls seem peaceful
Until he touches the water
The souls Reach out and tare him apart
Without even a blink
I see my wife on the other side of the river
And now I will not blink
A contest entry
- This Horror by B.bdawn.
525 points, ended October 23, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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wow, very deep. i am speechless, i dont even know how to comment on this poem its so beautifully written. just a few mistakes here and there, but no matter, thank you for entering and good luck!!
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