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House on the hill


He carried a small glass bottle,

just enough for a handful of soil.

Memories of the great flood, he said,

that took is homeland back to the sea.

 

He laughed, but the tears swelling

in his eyes burst down his cheeks.

Speaking softly he began reminiscing

the destruction of his hometown

by the silent wave.

 

One name was painted on his lips,

Yousaf Demitrious a local carpenter.

He explained in great detail how is friend

had saved many villagers from certain death.

 

I looked at him, he smiled back at me,

pointing to the surrounding walls.

He then started to explain the reason.

Yousaf built these walls with his bare hands,

he paused for a moment then smiled.

 

Pointing to a pile of bricks in the distance,

thats my old house, outside these walls on the hill.

 

 

 

 

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  • Starswhispers silver member
    October 24, 2007

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    What a wonderful piece here I love the meaning and slow sadness emerging from it. Lot of inner thought and beauty here, well done and thank you so much for entering this poem in the contest.

  • Lady Dragonwyck
    October 22, 2007
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    Beautifully told with love and sadness. Good luck in this contest...

    Lady D