My dearest child
Every night I said a prayer
To God and his angels
That you'd come back to me
My heart is screaming all night
Tears keep running on my face
Cause I ponder every memory of you
I just can’t imagine
A day of my life without you
Because you’re a part of me
And my love for you is true
But the time has come
You’re back in my arms again
I want you to know
There are not enough
Words to express
How happy I am
There's no denying
My heart was yours
Till the end of time
See you soon
My sweet angel Grace
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A contest entry
- A Special Day by BabyBun.
300 points, ended January 10, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This a very touching poem and I'm so glad you got yur daughter. May you both always be blessed
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This is very moving. I am so very happy for you. How is everything going? What a lovely story; and God really did answer your prayers!
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What a beautiful gift she is. I know you are so happy to be reunited..God bless you and the sweet little angel...
novy
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i love it. it truely shows the love of a mother to her daughter. I hope everything works out. good luck.
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This is a very good poem, full of emotions.
Hopefully everything will be alright now.
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Best luck to you and this poem is so amazing and beautiful. I'm so happy for you. God bless you always and keep up the wonderful work.
*smile* you deserve it.
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Aww this was beautiful and sweet and I'm so happy you are or have gotten your daughter back. I know the love have for my children surpass anything else in my life. I loved it
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Great
Yes like been said many times before me this poem is so full of deep devoted emotions. The love shines through between the lines, and a feeling of warmth touch the reader. You have done very well. But to see this struggle you were in to come to such a happy end must fill your heart with such extreme happiness. I have two kids myself and raise them both to were they are right now and thank god every day for it that i had them close to me all that time. However life is never easy as a single parent special not if your happen to be a man, its worth it.
thank you so very much for sharing and good luck together
Greetings Herman
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Thanks for entering this adorable poem. Good luck
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Tiffany is absolutely adorable! What a beatiful smile your daughter has. I am so very happy to know that the two of you are reunited. I could not imagine being separated from my kids.
Your love for your daughter shines forth in this poem, and it makes my heart smile. Tiffany Grace is so very blessed to have you for her mom.
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A daughter without a mother is like a sky with no sun, the pure outpourings of emotion here are just beautiful. I lost a daughter at 10mths of age to cotdeath and the grief in my heart is never still, but for you my dear you will get to know the love that is never broken, a pure and radiant one that will light your heart forever. I am so happy for you that you will be together, as it should be. Love, Chez
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Very touching as well as heartwarming.
There is no love like a mother's love dear.
Praying are the silent wings of angels that carry us through times when we cannot find our footing...
Becky
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Awww, what a beautiful little girl and a wonderful poem. Touched my heart. Hope everything goes well for you!
Adriana
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THis is so very sweet!!
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Awwwww
I am so happy Hello Sweetheart I know that mommy has got you back now you are so beautiful.Welcome home darling welcome home 
Mush love always
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well doing and thats great news
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So Amazing!! congratulations on your good news. I wish you both all the luck in the world and only happiness in your life. I know someone myself who also prays for such as you have.
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amazing
This is so gorgeous I love this so much! From start to finish this is very very gorgeous! It has so much intense moments and the words really do mean something. Every moment spoke to me, and I can feel all the emotions, it is a very deep write, and it is very beautiful. It flows so lovely together! It goes so deep and sooooooooo amazing!
BEAUTIFUL!
You are very creative!! Keep it up!!
Kit
x x x
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My dear sister Grace, that is wonderful news!
I am so happy for you and wish you the best
of luck with your daughter. She's beautiful!
It's great that she is coming home to you.
Take care my dear and thanks a lot for sharing
your story here!
Jeremy0826 -
What a heartfelt poem full of a mother's love and adoration for her baby. Thank you for sharing such a personal piece with us out here. Wishing you all the happiness and joy motherhood brings. Aloha to you and yours from out here in paradise.. alisa ;-)
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I am happy for you my friend with the message that lay in this piece is very much heartfelt.
"Ang kasiyahan ng Ina na makasama ang anak ay di maihahalintulad sa kahit ano pa man."
Keep writing my friend.
HENSLEY a.k.a VIRGOAN
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good luck and a happy future to you both.
Wim
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Your words express your feelings well. I wish you and your daughter much luck and happiness together
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Awww, I'm glad things turned out well for you. I enjoyed this piece, in it's shortness, it's very sweet and I can tell it's from the heart. Best wishes, and nice work.
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Good luck to you and your daughter, for the future.
All the best,
~T.S~
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Good luck to you sweet grace and I pray the for your safe return. I know your tears have fallen hard this last year since I've met you and I know now that your eyes will brighten with sunshine from you beautiful sunshine. May God be with you and your daughter.
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best of luck!!!
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Congratulations! Children are our future! What a sweet poem and a loving tribute as well!
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congrats.may your union be blessed. great poem so full of emotion and i understand why you can always tell when a mother writes about her heart the children that she gave life to but in return they gave her life meaning
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heart melting this is such a beautiful dedication to your daughter and the expresion of mothers love that is saturating each line is absolutley amazing its incredible thank you so much for sharing this with us this is a treasure of a write i wish you and tiffany all the luck in the world i am glad that you get to be with her
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how heartbreaking a very passionate poem here
i really liked the words you used
particularly here
"There's no denying
My heart was yours
Till the end of time"
becasue you cant put a price on love and affection very well penned -
I would never be able to even THINK of a situation that would give me such joy as hearing your daughting is coming to live with you! How wonderful! The poem is great too!
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oooo.... very well writtin!!
its such a heart felt write!!
i am very glad that your dreams and prayer came true!!
i wish you the very very best of luck!!
and i hope all is well for you and your daughter from here on out!!
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ahhhh... mother's love
I join those who have already wished you the best.
I love the feeling you put into this.
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FANTASTIC!!
Oh, this is awesome!!! I am so very happy and delighted to hear your good news in the form of such a wonderfully written poem!! It warms my heart to hear miracles still happen and prayers are answered. I wish you all the best and I hope that your reunion with her is all and more than what you expect!!! Cheering you on all the way from South Africa!!!
Nanette
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this poem has a story to it, it is the reunion between a daughter and her mother. a reflection of love that only a mother can give and i applaude your recognition of true inspiration. but i gotta say that it read like a free write. it is a diamond in the rough, keep writting poetess. i know u will shine through.
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This Was A Very Emotional, and Beautifully Well written poem! i'd say my favorite line was: "There's no denying my heart is yous." I'm so glad your gettting your daughter back...
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how wonderful it is when our dreams come true
there are no bounds for our joy.
best wishes to you and your daughter. from your words it's obvious she is very much loved by you. here's to wishing you both the best life has to offer
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An emotional piece that any mother would dread! I too was interpreting, with my heart on pause, that this was leading to the untimely death of a child. It was such a relief to find a happy ending! I am so glad that things have come to an amicable conclusion! Best of luck to you and your daughter...
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I am so truly glad for you. Every word that your poem whispers to me insists that you love her deeply and can't live without her. I share your high excitement at this precious re-union. No love is greater than a mother's for her child - none. camus
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this is a great poem. I read your notes and I'm glad you're getting your daughter back.
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Congratulations on the return of your daughter. A mother should never have to be seperated from their child, it is so wrong. You put your emotions and feelings into this poetry, and it is wonderful.
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Congrats on the return of your daughter. This poem is very heartbreaking at first it sounded like she had died
Very good write turned out good in the end
My ex husband trys to keep my son from me My daughter's middle name is Grace as Well -
<3 wonderful.
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this write touches the heart strings I am glad there will be a happy ending to this one. It hard to be away from one child. Custody cases are not fun to live thought. I truly wish you the best. I am glad it turn out so very well.
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How wonderful
So blessed you are to receive that ultimate gift to be given your daughter to raise . Hold her wings high at all times and through her learn to fly
. Rewarded 4
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"That you come back to me" - since it seems you're speaking in past-tense in the lines above this, I would recommend changing "you" to "you'd" as in: "That you would come back to me".
"That you come back to me
My heart is screaming all night"
The first line seems to end that particular part, since you're now going into a present-tense with the next line, I would suggest breaking those two lines, so the first 4 lines will stand on their own. Or add punctuation to the first line. Whichever works.
"Cause I ponder every memory of you" - the worlds "because" and "cause" are two different words, with two different meanings, and pronunciations. I would suggest placing a single apostrophe in front of "Cause" to change the tense of the word.
"But the time has come" - this line doesn't seem to have a real place in the poem itself. It doesn't go with the line above it, and it doesn't go with the line after it. I would suggest removing the line, yet keeping the break in place. So, the line below it, and above it can be separated.
"You’re back into my arms again" - the word "into" doesn't really sound right, to me. I would suggest making it "in" so the line would read:
"You're back in my arms again" - which I feel sounds better than what you have. Just a suggestion.
"How glad I am" - I would suggest replacing "glad" with "happy".
"How glad I am
There was no denying"
I feel there should be a break between these two lines. Just a suggestion.
"There was no denying
My heart was yours
Till the end of time"
I would suggest making "There was" into "There's" in the first line. In the second line I would suggest making "was" into "is", you use a mixture of present/past tense in all three lines that become quite confusing, and I feel it's grammatically incorrect.
The last two lines of the poem, I feel should be separated from the conjoining verse, it places a more vivid emotional impact, which I feel you're going for.
I would also recommend making this left-aligned, I feel it would be a better read, in the long run.
I would like to make a separate note that all of what I state above is just for helping you to improve the overall stability, and message of your poem. It's not meant to be negative, or demeaning. They are just suggestions, and my personal opinion. You may take them if you wish, or you can ignore them. That's your choice.
A lovely poem that you have written here.
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Personal
This is a very nice poem and i like how you tied it in with your feelings and what not, and im glad your getting your daughter back, i know how it must feel not to be able to be with someone you love so much. I wish you luck with that.
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what a beautiful poem, and congratulations on having your prayers answered. God really does amazing things in our lives, and this is just another sign of that Thank you for sharing, and be blessed.
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ohh thts great naa!!
and your emotions are nicely penned here,
i can see how much you love your daughter
wonderful
by
the poet of hearts and beautiful words
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Congratulations and blessings
we send to you dear mother. You have travelled your
journey well...and this new strength in your write
will do well to encourage another to not give up on
life! Hugs to you and Grace.
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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I thought the poem was sad till i read you notes on it!
So it's a happy poem!
Wishing you much luck with your beautiful daughter.
Silver
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Aww congradulations, I am so happy for you. This is a very nice and sweet poem, you should read this to her and tell her this is for her. Keep up the great writeing.
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Great poem Grace. I will pray to God that all will go well for you and youR daughter. I'm glad that God answered your prayers and gave you the desire of your heart.
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Oh what a wonderful blessing the Lord has given you. Proof that faithful prayers are answered. God Bless.
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you are blessed
to have such a child, yes I wish you luck.
Smile,
Judy
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The very best of luck!!!
That's so wonderful that you will be reunited with your daughter!
There is nothing so powerful as the love for a child... and you have expressed this in your words. Brought a tear to my eye! Just beautiful!
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