Music a way of words music's as popular as birds, music has it's funny ways, i could listen to it for days, i love it when that record plays, there was Michael Jackson and his thrillers, there was a band called The Killers the Temptations sang through tough times P.O.D excited us with their unique rhymes, today's music just isn't like the old stuff it's all ruined and so tough, the Beatles were fantastic the best of them all, Pink Floyd was magnificent standing tall, to name all the bands ever made is to live your life saying them all, so just as John Lennon once said all good things must end so must this poem, nothing to rhyme so i'll just sing a musical goodbye.
A contest entry
- ah, music! a magic greater than all we do here... by nanashiamai.
600 points, ended November 3, 2007, 10 entries
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great content, seen this type of layout before employed by other writers, a bit more difficult to track but a powerful poem regardless of format.
blessings and best wishes,
~r.
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Wicked!
This is a great read! And so true, I remember my dad saying to me 'this isn't music, you can't even hear the words!' I find myself thinking the same thing now with my children. Music is the only thing that doesn't improve with age...lol. Best of luck in the contest! -
aw, i like this. its cute. its a little hard to read because of the format, but you can still change that (in case you want to). i like all the references to bands too. pretty much all those bands are amazing. i love the beatles like nobodies business. music kind of dropped off after them. too bad...
great work, best of luck in all your writing endeavors.
~pasha -
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yeah
the beatles ARE awesome my favorite band EVER!
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