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The tattoed brain

The tattoed brain
is a ticklish thing
kept playing
is absolutely convinced of what is doing.

Infuriated
afflicted with modern ambition
the introspective consciousness
animates
psychedelia.

Especially prepared for the purpose
descent into madness
the blurry line
the tragic line
secretly experiences a good deal of emotions.

Themes, concepts and problems
the individual's place in society
the meaning of existance
power, war, education
is all in good cause
to do your bit
put your soul in all that is noble to you.

At rare moments
you can see what great possibilities in the oddly appealing
and dish out gold among the ashes.

Author notes

Inspired by Syd Barrett (Pink Floyd)

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  • Deindichter
    October 25, 2007

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    I like the eclectic voice in this, I love pink floyd very much. Your curt lines and specific wordchoice was a lovely coupling, all together very good, I enjoyed it very much.