I see you everywhere
In my mind and in my life
You never leave my thoughts
And you dominate my dreams
Each thought I have, is of you
But you cannot exist
Yet still I cannot think
Of anything but you
Now everything I see
Reminds me of you
And everything I hear
Makes me think of you
Before I knew of you
I thought of all I knew
As nothing with true meaning
But now it all means you
And I cannot imagine
A life devoid of you
For that would be
A life devoid of dreams
Author notes
Well...it's not my best...at all...but it's okay I guess so...yeah.......
A contest entry
- I Opened A Book and Fell In Love by CoundessaScarlotti.
500 points, ended October 27, 2007, 7 entries
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Comments
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Deep.........Again!
I see your emotion again. Even if this does not apply to you, you do a good job of stepping into the mind of someone who feel this way. A good poet has the ability to do so effectively.
Well written -
I like this poem because t describes well the feelings I have for several fictional character (Edward Cullen) My favorite part is where it says
Before I knew of you
I thought of all I knew
As nothing with true meaning
But now it all means you
I like it. -
Fangirl! You rock!
-Dlvvanzor
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You've captured the obsessive quality that I was looking for, but I wish you'd tell me why this person is worthy of obsessing over.
Wonderful job
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