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~Blue on Blue~

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her pastel brush paints reality Blue,
this perilous dreamer, in land of Rew.

immersing her feet in Indigo streams,
her soul uptakes all its sensual dreams.

and as she refreshes by Chambray falls,
listening to moaning chant of Gypsy calls

enveloped by mists of memories past,
embellishing her loves, so unsurpassed.

her ivory skin marbled sweet by full moon,
as her smile bequests all the heavens swoon.

closing her eyes she is thus transported,
to her true kingdom, it was reported.

thus on lavender nights, staring though the Elm
look closely for Blue, ruling in her realm.

 

 

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dedicated to Blue, a most charming conversationalist

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  • Danna Hobart
    November 13, 2007
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    This was lovely, and so is the picture. Thank you for highlighting the blues for me. Very nice.


  • Cherokee
    October 27, 2007
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    there is some pretty stuff here...


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    October 22, 2007

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    thus on lavender nights, staring though the Elm
    look closely for Blue, ruling in her realm.


    A heart warming verse..well done,..


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 22, 2007
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    this is beautifully written good luck in all your writtings

  • ashjoe76
    October 21, 2007

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    very good

    A very appropriate gift to someone you care for. The words and imageries have alasting quality, and the picture just supplements the whole effect. Congratulations, friend!


  • HaleyMary
    October 21, 2007

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    Beautiful write. Wonderful imagery and I liked how you described the color blue using so many different terms.
    Also a great tribute poem to a fellow poetess. Keep up the great work.


  • Blue Rew silver member
    October 21, 2007

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    Where did you find that beautiful image? Extraordinary words bestowed upon me. Thank-you for
    this fluid verse of mystic quality. It's very appealing to me! Blue

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