when will all this misery end for me
alll your friends they just wont let me be
they rubb everything in to my face
but ill be here for you just in case
if you ever need anyone to talk to ill always be there
i was always there i am the only one that ever did care
but look how you repay me....
is this how it really should be
i was sooo happy wen me n u got together
but now that day ended ill be here forever
u wont replace anyone in the whole world
but now your gone all i am one sad little girl......
i just want you to no how much i really love you......
and hope one day you will love me too
Author notes
misery
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under ONLY ~ At this moment.... by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended November 11, 2007, 11 entries
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Alot of emotions there, you do have some typos in the piece too. But overall I like how you've let your feeligns express themselves. It's a good thing to let them flow :D
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I am too young to have a boy friend, but I know how I would feel if I lost my best friend. This is a sad poem.
little sam
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