in our small way
into tall
- twenty storey -
buildings
This time one man died
one minute after take-off
and two were jolted off the couch:
programmus interruptus
The doctor in the ground floor suite
considered whether to cancel
the last appointment of the day
The fuselage is still embedded
in the window
but the neighbours have returned
for dinner
Author notes
meant to be ironic (in case the reader thinks I'm being flippant)
Rip away.
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are you being flippant?
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good write and I like the style it was written it... it worked well!!!!
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I can but see a petite mort ...
but then, zara, you know I always state the obvious.
You are clever AND have common sense ... a good combination. Well I think you are beautiful, too. Now you may become dangerous!
And I do feel guilty that I did not read you more.
Love
Myra
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you probably gonna hate this
it’s called
and the neighbors served dinner
in our small way intro
tall twentystore grown buildings
time one: man dead
one minute after
take-off and two jolted
off couch: programmus interruptus
the doctor in the ground
flour suited
the considerate waiter
pressed cancel
it was the last appointment of the day
fuselage framed and windowed
and the neighbors served dinner
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actually I quite like it and will adopt it in part, I think. Thank you!
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it's probably the only poem I ever wrote
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LOL!
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Inspired by a real event I guess telling from the comments of the other two Vancouverites down there, yet certainly not necessary for the poem.
Who doesn't crash into buildings? .. leaving damage stuck both inside ourselves, inside what we've hit and the areas surrounding the crash site. But some how life goes on despite our crashes
dinner, sunset, sunrise and the birds fly south for the winter.
Lisa
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the pilot .......SHOULD NOT have been flying... lol. They pull octogenarians off the road here ....but ...it's still fine to fly ..?????
wtf is up with that ??
lol .. I do get the irony .. indeed.
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LOVE IT!!!! Yes that was quite the event the other day wasn't it? You captured it beautifully, even included the pscyhologist . . . good to hear from your again fellow Vancouverite.
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