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You, Me, We.

You
Attracted me.
But did you know that?
Not at all.

You
You were great, but
Unobtainable.
She had you.

Me.
I am ugly.
This I know so well.
But worthless?

Me.
Unknowing,
You showed I'm useless.
Suicidal?

We
Never meant
To be, were we, love?
Loving hurts.

We.
You're happy.
What am I here for?
Love is Lost.

Author notes

Written about a boy, some months ago, who I liked very much, but was so out of my league it was unbelievable. Definitely not someone I will EVER be getting my greasy mits on but still someone I love dearly, though it's gone from love love to a sort of sibling love. Got really slapped back to reality on that one. lol I've moved on now, onto another one. Yay! I'm good at picking men! lol.

Any constructive crticism please! A feeling poem, but it's not great!

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