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my true love

i had a true love that gave my life a purpose.

warm was the blood that flowed in my viens.

thoughts of his smile made mine brighter.

his words of love filled my days.

my head on his chest,i heard his heart beat.

his breath felt warm on my skin.

his presence made me quiver as much as his touch,

everything i was,to him him i would give.

he ruled my thoughts,

with his power he cloaked me.

i was safe from the world and was his.

in our world i was set free.

each moment we had together was a life unto itself.

from eternities begining to the end of ever

in complete unity we walked the earth,

always would we be for each other.

death could not still the destiny of the universe.

our path was always to be united.

in thinking and love,in spirit and soul,

i never thoughtin this life we would ever be divided.

cc



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  • Hiddenspaces
    October 23, 2007

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    hm...overeall it was good but the ending was a little lacking because now i am wondering this
    1.what happened to divide them
    to me the endings are the most important so i do not know if i am going to keep it.