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I long for thee.

I watch thee next door;
I wish to hold you in mine arms.

You are the girl next door;
I wish to make you mine.

I want to call you mine;
I long to know you by name.

I wish to see you in my sights;
I wish to know you as a lover.

I long to be with you forever more;
I wish for you to see that we are one.

You see me here and do not notice me;
I am just a blank spot on the waves.

I am just a bird in the air;
You are my princess and I your frog.

I wish for you to kiss me;
I long to be held in your arms.

I long to be loved by you;
I long for you to be in love with me.

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I long for thee.

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    October 22, 2007
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    Sweet I goo work on putting it together Good luck in the contest


  • Passionate Phoenix
    October 22, 2007

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    this is really sweet and very well put together, a bit repetitive in the beginning though, but still good non-the-less. thanks for a fine entry.