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Disappearing

How many days
can I love you
without disappearing,
diving in to you.
Drowning in your river
Drifting into your night
Dancing my life away
with you
How many days
can I love you
drifting in your night,
disappearing into you.

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  • ScrewAllOfYou
    October 21, 2007
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    I know it'll be hard for me to drift away from my gf, but i know people do... it hurts because you're sitting there telling yourself "how can this be? i dont love her the same anymore and we're just not the same"
    Its hard when a couple drifts... hope you dont drift.