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Simply a Smile

I'm sitting here
tears running down my face
waiting for some miracle
to make my pain erased

A battered soul
a broken wing
Your simple smile
makes the heavens sing

A memory
etched in mind
a single moment
lasting till the end of time

Floating away
on your smile
Oh please
stay around for awhile

I need your smile
your musical laugh
without you
I'm only half

So wipe my tears
hold my hand
for your smile
makes me all that i am.







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  • Passionate Phoenix
    October 22, 2007

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    this is really well written, lovely wording used, a lot of emotion here, well done and thanks for entering xx