am I numb
where are the words
why are my thoughts like
glaciers
locked between peaks
of potential cracked by
gravity the press
of time
yet herein
potential groans release
ever so slowly
imperceptibly
through rocky channels
steep alpine valleys
ground barren
by frost
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ooh, chilly... frozen and numb. sometimes i feel like this with writers block, just stuck. "locked between peaks"--- very expressive line. awesome work.
blessings and stomps
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it's COLD
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A poem about writer's block.
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dang...you even tweeked the position of your words...waht an effect...I've tried it, but it doesn't show...
<3,
-Pap.
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I like this, its somewhat simple in thought yet also very complex. Amazing how words play on the minds eye and conjure a subconcious image.
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Doesn't look like your thoughts are frozen
The pen must have melted them, releasing your thoughts through your words.
To feel stuck, not a good thing...
Very good poem!
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Reminds me of the first time I asked a girl for a date, frozen stiff. Hehehe, a well painted word picture. You word-crafting has chosen the correct hues to keep the images cool to see, but painful to touch.
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