I can't hold on much longer,
this pain inside intense
My life is spiraling downward
My life force is spent
I know what it feels like to be
beaten
bruised
and raped
My saviors are still trying
oblivious that it's too late
and for what they strive
is to help
me
survive...
And with me knowing that
I struggle on and on
Trying to forget
all that has been done
and as i struggle on and on i realized
all
that i've
become....
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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good.
good job baby keep up the good work. p.s. i love you ^>^*
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this is a brilliant piece of self expression and i can relate from irene
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hang in there girl u r a strong person b brave. this is a wonderful piece from irene
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such raw emotion and pain...it breaks the beating heart and moves eyes to shed their innocent water more commonly known as tears, this is a brillaint dark write filled with agony
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