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Slope

crow’s feet hustle with poor timing

beneath her tired blue eyes

to the beat of "I got you babe"

by Sonny and Cher

her husband's secret favorite CD

he insisted on blasting

at volume to frighten the cat

loosen grit between nauseating

green kitchen tiles

and infuriate the neighbors


rattling her frayed nerves

like the ice cubes pinging

salted glass fish bowls

disguised as respectable vestibules

to receive another round

of margaritas

for her unsuspecting husband

and his drunk brother

with tequila bought in Cozumel

along with condoms


five weeks before the rabbit died


just like Sonny

Author notes

* Mention a classic television show: Sonny & Cher
* One alcoholic drink: margarita
* Name a specific location in the Poem: Cozumel

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  • Annalise
    November 8, 2007

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    My rabbit died! Way after Sonny, mind you. Actually, it died a couple weeks ago. I still miss that rabbit.

    "salted glass fish bowls" That's a hell of an image.

    I love the Sonny & Cher version of "I Got You, Babe". More so than the Bevis(sp?) and Butthead version with Cher. Yeah, I still remember that from the 90's. Some things should have been buried with Sonny.

    This is a damn good poem.

    Yeah.

  • the chase
    October 26, 2007
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    This is amazing (:


  • FindingFaith
    October 21, 2007
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    This is exceptional.

  • Rowan gold member
    October 21, 2007

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    "salted glass fish bowls

    disguised as respectable vestibules

    to receive another round

    of margaritas"
    oh~ too funny. I could picture this scene vividly.
    Love the unexpected twist at the end.